雅思小作文(表格类)考官范文分析|IELTS英语写作

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今天,我们一起看看如何写表格类小作文

下面以一篇雅思表格类范文为例,一步步分解如何写表格类雅思英语小作文

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

雅思小作文(表格类)考官范文分析|IELTS英语写作

雅思英语表格题小作文

范文如下:

The table gives information about poverty rates among six types of household in Australia in the year 1999.

It is noticeable that levels of poverty were higher for single people than for couples, and people with children were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably lower among elderly people.

Overall, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000 people, were living in poverty in 1999. Aged people were the least likely to be poor, with poverty levels of 6% and 4% for single aged people and aged couples respectively.

Just over one fifth of single parents were living in poverty, whereas only 12% of parents living with a partner were classed as poor. The same pattern can be seen for people with no children: while 19% of single people in this group were living below the poverty line, the figure for couples was much lower, at only 7%.

范文分析:

第一段:开头段 Introduction :改写题目中的信息

改写前:

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

shows = gives information about

the proportion = poverty rates

different categories of families = six types of household

in 1999 = in the year 1999

改写后:

The table gives information about poverty rates among six types of household in Australia in the year 1999.

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第二段:总括段 Overview : 总结主要趋势和特点

上述表格中的最主要的特征,从全局比较如下:

  1. single people 的贫困率大于couples
  2. people with children的贫困率大于people without children
  3. elderly people的贫困程度要小

It is noticeable that levels of poverty were higher for single people than for couples, and people with children were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably lower among elderly people.

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第三段和第四段:细节段details:

当数据很多时,挑选最重要的数据进行描述。当数据很少时,每个数据都描述。尽可能对数据进行归类

在上述表格中,数据可以很好地归为三大类:

  1. aged people: single + couple
  2. people with children: single + couple
  3. people without children: single + couple

然后对每个类别进行比较。

  1. aged people:single aged people(6%)and aged couples(4% )【最高级比较the least likely to be poor】

Aged people were the least likely to be poor, with poverty levels of 6% and 4% for single aged people and aged couples respectively.

  1. single parents:21% 【 whereas比较】
  2. couple with children: 12%

Just over one fifth of single parents were living in poverty, whereas only 12% of parents living with a partner were classed as poor.

  1. single without children: 19% 【while比较】
  2. couple without children:7%

While 19% of single people in this group were living below the poverty line, the figure for couples was much lower, at only 7%.

在细节段,我们最常用的句型,就是上述表示比较的句型。

词汇学习

从上面的范文中,我们可以学习如下表示贫困的词汇:

  • poverty rates 贫困率
  • levels of poverty 贫困水平
  • were likely to be poor 有可能处于贫困状态
  • live in poverty 生活在贫困中
  • were classed as poor 被归为贫困类
  • live below the poverty line生活在贫困线下

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